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Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapter 1: Her (edit)
of course it helps ^^ its nice to get an only-positive review once in a while, im almost done with chapter 3. here is the links you may want to ...
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Re: Heart Stabbed Blade ch. 2 Toji Talks a Lot
you may want to check out the edited version of this
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: How You Pick Your Avatar
I usually find an image that I like and work it a little (colours, levels, textures) until it's perfect. I am, however, planning to start an icon collection from several ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Twilight series
the first book was awesome, the second and third were a bit lower on the rating scale, and the last book was, from both a writers and a readers point ...
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Re: looking for a good site to find synonyms
i have been looking for a site to find synonyms. i, though, am looking for one that i could type in a line , and then get one word to ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Victim Number Eight
sorry i wasnt able to do a edit for you; my PC freaked when i was right in the middle. to make up, here is a list of your most ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapter 2: toji talks a lot (edit)
thank you. i am doing my homework, you know; reading more books and all that happy crap. the way i write is pretty messed too. i go through drafts and ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapter 1: Her (edit)
thank you for the advice. it is hard to find a balance between realism and fantasy. you advice will help me a lot EDIT: i know this is REALLY REALLY ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of Desperation ;2
Hello(: Some people felt nothing 'romantic' happened in the first chapter - but seriously? I don't think a story should rush into romance at the very first chapter. I feel ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapter 1: Her (edit)
T_T more masculine T_T since my first draft was so bad, that i couldn't get too many changes at once without accidentally changing the plot. this is my first work, ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapter 1: Her (edit)
thank you. don't worry ^^ i know that not every work is liked by everyone, and there are always mistakes. the main thing is to get them out while keeping ...
Sep 20, 2008 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapter 1: Her (edit)
well, read the chapter 1 (not edit). it would be impossible to say im not improving. it sucks. just plain sucks
Sep 20, 2008 -
Re: Echidna (Chapter 2: The Punishment)
((Although I wrote the first chapter in a third person PoV, I considered experimenting and using a first person PoV, instead. I may go back one of these days and ...
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapter 1: Her (edit)
you are. i didn't yell it out because it would be unnatural, which seems to be my main problem with my work. since this is my first own work, and ...
Sep 18, 2008 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapter 2: toji talks a lot (edit)
i always use anime emotes ^_^ anyway, great review. i did go a bit overboard with the explanation, didnt i? guess it is kinda like what happened in bleach, but ...
Sep 18, 2008
